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基本想法能够表达出来,这点不错。
不过思想较肤浅,措辞不够到位,废话较多,像"还我们一片纯净的天空"之类的空洞并且缺乏说服力的话以后尽量少说。
i once let the trustest love sliped away from below my eyes.  
only to know that regreting myself when it was too late.  
it is no paint in the world can come near to this.  
if only god would give me another chance, i will said to the gril. i chocalate you.
if it had to be a limit of time, i pray it's ……ten thousands years.

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