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标题: '*失樂園”﹫. [打印本页]

作者: もこなあぱぱ    时间: 2006-2-26 09:28     标题: '*失樂園”﹫.

i'm afraid i'm starting to feel


what i said i would not do


the last time really hurt me


i'm sacred to fall in love


afraid to fall so fast


'cause every time i fall in love


it seems too never last


but every time your love is near


and every time i'm filled with fear


'cause every time i see you ce


my heart does begins to race every time


one half wants me to go


one half wants me to stay


i just get oh so confused


every time your love is near


and every time i'm filled with fear


'cause every time i see you ce


it's everytime.


the fear does start to erase every time


oh could it be that this will be the one that lasts


for all my times


for all my times












作者: calvinsonic    时间: 2006-2-26 13:27

貌似文法不太對,但寫詩本來就沒有文法......
貌似有中翻英的嫌疑
作者: 小小龙儿    时间: 2006-2-26 13:32

拿走做素材了
作者: もこなあぱぱ    时间: 2006-2-26 14:04

原帖由 calvinsonic 于 2006-2-26 13:27 发表
貌似文法不太對,但寫詩本來就沒有文法......
貌似有中翻英的嫌疑


我是英语没学好的人...
作者: dd3472945    时间: 2006-2-26 16:06

看贴是学习,回贴是礼貌。
作者: lightblue    时间: 2006-2-26 21:34

楼上怎么每次都这句话?!
作者: もこなあぱぱ    时间: 2006-2-27 12:11






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