英语英语..突破60就是胜利!
[color=Red][size=5]60分就可以通往天堂!![/size][/color][[i] 本帖最后由 勇气の翼 于 2008-5-17 17:58 编辑 [/i]] 请google英语作文万能语句 英语作文实在不行就把前面的阅读理解抄一段好了………………- - My Life For Aiur! [quote]原帖由 [i]мō斯拉[/i] 于 2008-5-16 22:33 发表 [url=http://bbs.rohome.net/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=9149063&ptid=894206][img]http://bbs.rohome.net/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
英语作文实在不行就把前面的阅读理解抄一段好了………………- - [/quote]
老师说过的..千万别抄..因为阅卷老师已经把整张卷子全吃透了..你抄了就算满分作文都扣掉你一半 多用用从句,加点what that which之类的,某些大学生阅卷者就是靠从句的多少打分的
高分就这样出来了 [quote]原帖由 [i]勇气の翼[/i] 于 2008-5-16 22:35 发表 [url=http://bbs.rohome.net/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=9149076&ptid=894206][img]http://bbs.rohome.net/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
老师说过的..千万别抄..因为阅卷老师已经把整张卷子全吃透了..你抄了就算满分作文都扣掉你一半 [/quote]
你都抄阅读理解了还指望作文满分。。= =
最多给个辛苦分………… [quote]原帖由 [i]?鈁悾Dě俊[/i] 于 2008-5-16 22:36 发表 [url=http://bbs.rohome.net/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=9149082&ptid=894206][img]http://bbs.rohome.net/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
多用用从句,加点what that which之类的,某些大学生阅卷者就是靠从句的多少打分的
高分就这样出来了 [/quote]
写几句我背背..比如奥运.世博的 还可以用HOW..WHAT吧..
What a Beautiful city !!!之类的? ……
LZ这样是不行的…………
还不如现在去BAIDU 搜索。- -
不是有直译的么。 早点睡吧~
我帮你写几句~
according to a recent survey...~
the latest survey show that...~
many experts point that...~
there is no denying the fact that...~
让我再想想~ as we all know , the olympic which is held in Beijing will come in aug.8th, 2008
it`s a very exciting celebration to all the people who is a member of chinese or not
unlickly , many disasters happened in china which make surprises attack on us, for instance, "free tibet""the earthquake on sichuan wenchuan" "snow disasters"and so on
but i believe all the wrong things like that will be overcome and defeat.
just do our best to welcome the peking olympic to the best of our abilities.
go olympic ! go china!
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[[i] 本帖最后由 ?鈁悾Dě俊 于 2008-5-16 22:52 编辑 [/i]] 3Q3Q..全部抄小本子上..明天先搏数学..语文怎么着60分也拿的到..
后天搏英语..争取拿个平均65分
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one car goone car come
two car peng-peng
one car dead 11楼那个 高考用来很嗲 [quote]原帖由 [i]帮主掉进粪坑啦[/i] 于 2008-5-16 22:53 发表 [url=http://bbs.rohome.net/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=9149129&ptid=894206][img]http://bbs.rohome.net/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
one car go
one car come
two car peng-peng
one car dead [/quote]
我记得是two car peng-peng man man dead [quote]原帖由 [i]?鈁悾Dě俊[/i] 于 2008-5-16 22:50 发表 [url=http://bbs.rohome.net/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=9149119&ptid=894206][img]http://bbs.rohome.net/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
as we all know , the olympic which is held in Beijing will come in aug.8th, 2008
it`s a very exciting celebration to all the people who is a member of chinese or not
unlickly , many disasters ... [/quote]
弓虽 可惜我高考92,NND当初怎么没那么大想象力都是些陈词滥调 我91 悲剧死了 哈,去年考的? [quote]原帖由 [i]roflier[/i] 于 2008-5-16 22:56 发表 [url=http://bbs.rohome.net/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=9149140&ptid=894206][img]http://bbs.rohome.net/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
弓虽 [/quote]
[m_倒] 4年前 问题是 我现在已经写不出这句子了 我得好好看看书了 搏斗数学ING...12点睡觉..数学和数学是关键..!!有一门能上70就稳了 明天考试你现在在抓瞎么 早点睡觉才是真~ 我们等着你的喜讯-_- 临阵磨枪.不亮也光! 世博的东西可以跟着奥运一样
注意起承转合,没转折人家看起来会睡着的,什么although but(当然这两个不能一起)之类的
顺序可以用
first
secondly
last but not least来衔接比较好记
用这个顺序就是把最重要的塞在前面,后面是补充也就是不重要的,记得加上自己的观点in my outlook/opinion避免别人以为你炒的
反过来写的话就是用另外的衔接词了,你需要我可以帮你找出来
[[i] 本帖最后由 ?鈁悾Dě俊 于 2008-5-16 23:18 编辑 [/i]] sorry,i don't know
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