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もこなあぱぱ 发表于 2006-2-26 09:28

'*失樂園”﹫.

[align=center]i'm afraid i'm starting to feel [/align]
[align=center]what i said i would not do[/align]
[align=center]the last time really hurt me[/align]
[align=center]i'm sacred to fall in love[/align]
[align=center]afraid to fall so fast[/align]
[align=center]'cause every time i fall in love [/align]
[align=center]it seems too never last[/align]
[align=center]but every time your love is near[/align]
[align=center]and every time i'm filled with fear[/align]
[align=center]'cause every time i see you ce[/align]
[align=center]my heart does begins to race every time[/align]
[align=center]one half wants me to go[/align]
[align=center]one half wants me to stay[/align]
[align=center]i just get oh so confused[/align]
[align=center]every time your love is near[/align]
[align=center]and every time i'm filled with fear[/align]
[align=center]'cause every time i see you ce[/align]
[align=center]it's everytime.[/align]
[align=center]the fear does start to erase every time[/align]
[align=center]oh could it be that this will be the one that lasts[/align]
[align=center]for all my times[/align]
[align=center]for all my times[/align]
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calvinsonic 发表于 2006-2-26 13:27

貌似文法不太對,但寫詩本來就沒有文法......
貌似有中翻英的嫌疑

小小龙儿 发表于 2006-2-26 13:32

拿走做素材了

もこなあぱぱ 发表于 2006-2-26 14:04

[quote]原帖由 [i]calvinsonic[/i] 于 2006-2-26 13:27 发表
貌似文法不太對,但寫詩本來就沒有文法......
貌似有中翻英的嫌疑 [/quote]

我是英语没学好的人...-_-

dd3472945 发表于 2006-2-26 16:06

看贴是学习,回贴是礼貌。

lightblue 发表于 2006-2-26 21:34

楼上怎么每次都这句话?!

もこなあぱぱ 发表于 2006-2-27 12:11

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