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Ellie 发表于 2005-6-23 17:02

N年前被编辑部打回来两次的原创短篇.....

看了凤凰滴画~~~偶也好好想贴啊~~
于是翻出N年前的投稿作品~~~~扫描然后加上对白~~~都是手工贴网点纸,发上来看有点像电脑弄的了~~~
请大家忽略那些畸形滴身体~~~无聊的对白~~~~~||||||||
就看正太和LOLI吧~~~~
对了~~严禁转载~~!!!!!!
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wkj123 发表于 2005-6-23 17:04

???? :ph34r: LOLI版光速小飞侠?

lamar 发表于 2005-6-23 17:06

不措阿~~那个编辑那么傻~~~不要阿

3035450 发表于 2005-6-23 17:07

LM陷身你跑不掉拉~~嘎嘎

Ellie 发表于 2005-6-23 17:09

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嘿嘿,这张我最爱~~~帅哥登场哦~~!
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undead phoenix 发表于 2005-6-23 17:15

喔.....
厉害喔.网点怎么用的?师傅~ <good>

Ellie 发表于 2005-6-23 17:16

大家~~~能不能等偶发完了再发表意见||||||
那编辑说了~~~没有用~~主要是因为我画人畸形|||||||
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3035450 发表于 2005-6-23 17:18

EE大魔王万岁

Ellie 发表于 2005-6-23 17:24

呵呵~~~构图有点奇怪对不对~~因为我这个作品是模仿了CLOVER的画风和构图~~
不知道为什么,放上来模糊了很多~~~网点也看不清~~就一片灰~~还是看原稿效果好~
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这一页的网纸有点皱了~~~
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呵呵~~终于贴完鸟~~可以的话~~姐姐加个精吧~~~谢谢哦~~MUA~~

永远爱老婆Ellie 发表于 2005-6-23 17:29

好呀~~哈哈~~~老婆还有米?

飒加 发表于 2005-6-23 17:31

挖哈哈哈哈哈
最后一张好

Open－梦想 发表于 2005-6-23 17:31

我给你加精了
两个字形容............仰慕..........

undead phoenix 发表于 2005-6-23 17:34

<555>
为什么可以画得这么漂亮...
不过剧情很深奥.

3035450 发表于 2005-6-23 17:35

EVA　一般的剧情~~~8错

Ellie 发表于 2005-6-23 17:36

呵呵~~~谢谢大家支持哈~~~
33为什么说我是魔王...........................|||||||||

gmw5552000 发表于 2005-6-23 17:37

编辑要的是商业利润

Ellie 发表于 2005-6-23 17:40

凤凰看不懂吗?|||||||
楼上哦~~~偶去编辑部请教滴~~~她说偶剧情虾米滴都米问题~~就是人体结构和透视上的问题~~~~所以米用~~~~~
所以我要苦练人体结构啊~~~~~残念啊~~!

undead phoenix 发表于 2005-6-23 17:42

看是看懂....
但是...但是..无feel~

Ellie 发表于 2005-6-23 17:49

哎.................以前画滴太沉重了~~~现在想画搞笑的~~偶已经好久不动笔鸟~~~~~凤凰给偶编个搞笑短篇吧~~~~~~把论坛的人也编进去~~

暴走绵羊 发表于 2005-6-23 17:51

萌啊~~~~~~~~~~~~~EE萌啊~~~~~~精个~~~~偶要灭了那编辑

undead phoenix 发表于 2005-6-23 17:53

吓....
很难想的喔..而且我也正在画.

吹個小泡泡 发表于 2005-6-23 17:55

画得真好。有点小CLAMP的风格。

暴走绵羊 发表于 2005-6-23 18:01

E搞的第一步：反串——本来应该是黑色性格的人物，显现的是白色性格
第二步：玩恶心——星爷的绝学，玩便便，鼻涕一类。
第三步：夸张——我不相信你舌头有两米长，但是偶看到你牙齿有3米宽
第四步：无厘头——“今天吃饭了吗？”“嗯，刚刚拉完（指着WC），还热呼呼的。

☆.鎕 菓o.﹎ 兲 使 发表于 2005-6-23 18:31

画的真强啊~~为撒会被退捏。。其司很多漫画家都有画畸形的呀。。而且这叫个性了。。编辑部的冷明显米眼光了。。

Ellie 发表于 2005-6-23 19:29

嘿嘿~~~~有时间偶画个像凤凰一样,铅笔稿式的~~糨糊故事哈~~

贱男村 发表于 2005-6-23 19:34

编辑思维有问题......

undead phoenix 发表于 2005-6-23 19:49

我想问一下.
你是用什么笔画线搞的?

暴走绵羊 发表于 2005-6-23 19:52

估计是美工笔

undead phoenix 发表于 2005-6-23 19:55

试过用了,但是不知为什么线条很不流畅.
而且手会很脏

暴走绵羊 发表于 2005-6-23 19:59

用了网点吧。。。不过不会用……

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